In which I put my money where my mouth was.
The revision is so much better! I notice that it makes really good use of dialogue, which is something I really struggle with.
Great demonstration of revision. It's teacher's version of "show, don't tell." You show how to do it, instead of telling. As a writing teacher I know how hopeless it is to tell students to revise. It can only be shown.
The revision is so much better! I notice that it makes really good use of dialogue, which is something I really struggle with.
Great demonstration of revision. It's teacher's version of "show, don't tell." You show how to do it, instead of telling. As a writing teacher I know how hopeless it is to tell students to revise. It can only be shown.